Comments for LPUMS GATE/Tech Language Arts Classes

Comment on Jaydylee’s Quiz by mrscarino

mrscarino — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 19:03:33 +0000

Your grade:
Create a post (Out of 10 pts) =10
Persuasive paragraph (Out of 50 pts) =50
Link to school website (Out of 20 pts) =20
Image from the website (Out of 20 pts) =10
- Image linked improperly

Total = 90%

Comment on Colin’s Quiz by mrscarino

mrscarino — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 19:01:37 +0000

Your grade:
Create a post (Out of 10 pts) =10
Persuasive paragraph (Out of 50 pts) =45
- Incomplete sentence: “The Untalan Middle School website.”
- “if your curious” (you’re for you are)
Link to school website (Out of 20 pts) =0
Image from the website (Out of 20 pts) =20

Total = 75%

Comment on Christiana’s Quiz by mrscarino

mrscarino — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 18:57:49 +0000

Your grade:
Create a post (Out of 10 pts) =10
Persuasive paragraph (Out of 50 pts) =40
- The paragraph is supposed to be about promoting the school website.
Link to school website (Out of 20 pts) =0
Image from the website (Out of 20 pts) =10

Total = 60%

Comment on Jeremiah’s Quiz by mrscarino

mrscarino — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 18:54:21 +0000

Your grade:
Create a post (Out of 10 pts) =10
Persuasive paragraph (Out of 50 pts) =43
- Be careful of these errors: “childs” (child’s), “sommarizes” (summarizes), “whats” (what’s), “0f” (of–I think you used a zero), “If your lost” (you’re), “sch00l” (school), “als0″ (also)
Link to school website (Out of 20 pts) =excused
Image from the website (Out of 20 pts) =excused

Total = 53/60 = 88%

Comment on Frances’s Quiz by mrscarino

mrscarino — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 18:45:41 +0000

Your grade:
Create a post (Out of 10 pts) =10
Persuasive paragraph (Out of 50 pts) =45
- Remember to write at least 5 sentences
Link to school website (Out of 20 pts) =20
Image from the website (Out of 20 pts) =20

Total = 95%

Comment on Pialani’s Quiz by mrscarino

mrscarino — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 18:43:58 +0000

Your grade:
Create a post (Out of 10 pts) =10
Persuasive paragraph (Out of 50 pts) =45
- Not entirely true: “It talks about the sports team like the volleyball game or the basketball game.”
Link to school website (Out of 20 pts) =20
Image from the website (Out of 20 pts) =20

Total = 95%

Comment on Gerald’s Quiz by mrscarino

mrscarino — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 18:40:27 +0000

Your grade:
Create a post (Out of 10 pts) =10
Persuasive paragraph (Out of 50 pts) =40
- This hasn’t happened, yet: “It shows all the sport events.”
- Awkward sentences
- Use taken instead of “took”
Link to school website (Out of 20 pts) =20
Image from the website (Out of 20 pts) =20

Total = 90%

Comment on Erin’s Quiz by mrscarino

mrscarino — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 18:37:17 +0000

Your grade:
Create a post (Out of 10 pts) =10
Persuasive paragraph (Out of 50 pts) =50
Link to school website (Out of 20 pts) =10
- Not linked properly
Image from the website (Out of 20 pts) = 20

Total =90%

Comment on christian’s quiz 2 by mrscarino

mrscarino — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 18:33:42 +0000

Your grade:
Create a post (Out of 10 pts) =10
Persuasive paragraph (Out of 50 pts) =40
- I’m not sure where you might find the info for: “You’ll learn how our grading system works and what our school does to improve students’ average GPA ( grade point average ).”
or
“You’ll see who the many students of Untalan are and what they like to do.” There aren’t any student profiles, yet.

Link to school website (Out of 20 pts) =0
Image from the website (Out of 20 pts) =10
- image not linked properly

Total =60%

Comment on daniel’s quiz by mrscarino

mrscarino — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 18:28:19 +0000

Your grade:
Create a post (Out of 10 pts) = 10
Persuasive paragraph (Out of 50 pts) =50
Link to school website (Out of 20 pts) =20
Image from the website (Out of 20 pts) =20

Total = 100%

Great job!